ohhh that comment. lol~ I remember it.
The thing with that particular animation is that its my first animation with an actor, and I had too much i wanted to do with the visuals, so compromised the writing. :) I hope to do better shorts in the future overcoming the problem.
o lol i mostly remembered bcuz i put a comment there that got rated highly (small world huh?) I remember saying sumtn about the picture and animation being great but u needing to work on ur poetic delivery, i dont see that problem so far in the comic tho. lol